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(Declining submission: npov - Submission is not written in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone (AFCH 0.9.1)) |
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{{AFC submission|||u=WikiBharat|ns=118|ts=20240114175351}} <!-- Do not remove this line! --> | {{AFC submission|d|npov|u=WikiBharat|ns=118|decliner=Bharatwiki Socrates|declinets=20240910001301|ts=20240114175351}} <!-- Do not remove this line! --> | ||
{{AFC comment|1=The issues pointed out by me previously is not yet solved. [[User:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="font-weight:bold;color:#1f618d;text-shadow:1px 1px 2px #3498db;">🍁Bharatwiki Socrates🍁</span>]][[User talk:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="color:#FF9933;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:1px 2px #1f618d;">(📩)</span>]] 00:13, 10 September 2024 (IST)}} | |||
{{AFC comment|1=The writing style should be more formal and encyclopedic. The current draft includes some promotional language and informal phrases, which should be revised for a neutral tone. Additionally, ensure consistency in formatting and presentation. For example, the list of employees and their designations should be presented in a more structured manner, and the use of terms like "social media services ETC" should be clarified or omitted. [[User:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="font-weight:bold;color:#1f618d;text-shadow:1px 1px 2px #3498db;">🍁Bharatwiki Socrates🍁</span>]][[User talk:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="color:#FF9933;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:1px 2px #1f618d;">(📩)</span>]] 01:33, 26 July 2024 (IST)}} | {{AFC comment|1=The writing style should be more formal and encyclopedic. The current draft includes some promotional language and informal phrases, which should be revised for a neutral tone. Additionally, ensure consistency in formatting and presentation. For example, the list of employees and their designations should be presented in a more structured manner, and the use of terms like "social media services ETC" should be clarified or omitted. [[User:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="font-weight:bold;color:#1f618d;text-shadow:1px 1px 2px #3498db;">🍁Bharatwiki Socrates🍁</span>]][[User talk:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="color:#FF9933;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:1px 2px #1f618d;">(📩)</span>]] 01:33, 26 July 2024 (IST)}} | ||
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{{AFC comment|1=The writing style should be more formal and encyclopedic. The current draft includes some promotional language and informal phrases, which should be revised for a neutral tone. Additionally, ensure consistency in formatting and presentation. For example, the list of employees and their designations should be presented in a more structured manner, and the use of terms like "social media services ETC" should be clarified or omitted. [[User:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="font-weight:bold;color:#1f618d;text-shadow:1px 1px 2px #3498db;">🍁Bharatwiki Socrates🍁</span>]][[User talk:Bharatwiki_Socrates|<span style="color:#FF9933;font-weight:bold;text-shadow:1px 2px #1f618d;">(📩)</span>]] 01:33, 26 July 2024 (IST)}} | |||
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